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May 292013
 

Writing Streets of Payne is in the home stretch.  It is off to Red Adept Publishing Services for acceptance of my editing changes (in which case it goes on to the proofreader), or they send it back with another round of suggested changes.  Once the editing is complete, the manuscript goes to Streetlight Graphics (where the cover art is already being done) for formatting, after which it will be ready for publishing.  It’s close, close, close! Cool

STIDPersonal   STID - Trekkies know what I mean immediately.  Or is it Trekkers?  Question Sorry, I was once corrected and lectured on the difference between a Trekker and a Trekkie but I honestly don’t recall what it was.  At any rate, my better half and I went to see Star Trek: Into Darkness.  What’s more, we saw it on a full-sized Imax screen, and in 3D.  Best of all, we saw it with some friends I hadn’t seen in a year or more.  It was actually a little nostalgic for me, and not just because I got to rekindle the old friendships.

You see, in 1983 I was invited to go see a movie with a group of “old” high school friends.  I was twenty-two years old at the time, and the movie was Return of the Jedi.  At twenty-two, I was relatively independent, had an apartment, my own car (and it usually started when I needed it to), and was still at the point in my life where I had relatively few responsibilities.  The latest Star Wars movie was right up my alley.  Unfortunately, one of our group wasn’t quite as care-free as I was at that time.  I got a call from a mutual friend that a girl I had gone to school with, but hadn’t seen in several years, had car trouble and didn’t think she was going to be able to make it.  He told me that she had been having a particularly rough time in life (don’t ask – it’s not my story to tell) and she needed a ride.  I went to get her, and our friendship picked up like we’d never been separated.  Three years later, I tricked that same girl into marrying me.  Smile

So this group date last week to see a new sci-fi movie was a reminder for me of how my relationship with my wonderful wife got started.  And no, the friends this time weren’t old high school friends.  Thirty years is a long time to maintain friendships, and there is only one of that original group (besides my wife) that I am still in touch with.  Such is life.  But they were good friends, and it was a reminder that every once in a while, it’s good to slow down and smell the roses, so to speak.

10k-02And speaking of slowing down and smelling the roses, we went to visit my parents over Memorial Day weekend.  It was such a great time.  We got to kick back, relax, and let the dogs run in the field (my wife calls it “Doggie Heaven”).  There really isn’t a whole lot to say about how nice it is up there, so I’ll just leave you with this…

Click on the image to see it closer.  AAMOF, if you click on the image a few times, I believe it will REALLY zoom in for you.

Well, that’s it for now.  I hope you all had as good a holiday weekend as we did.  Until next time, stay safe.  Bye

 Posted by at 10:08 pm
Mar 252013
 
Almost done!

Almost done!

It’s been more than three weeks since I’ve posted here. Not quite as bad as I’ve been in the past, but I still owe you all an update. I’ve been working like crazy on Streets of Payne, and I’m happy to report that it’s just about done!  Woohoo! Laugh

The first draft of the manuscript was completed on March 17, and while I was incredibly relieved to have that huge part of the process behind me, I had a feeling that the ending was too rushed. Nevertheless, I sent it off to my beta readers and took a day to rest. Then I dove back in to begin the first rewrites.

The initial manuscript was a real mess. Not necessarily the story itself, but my writing “style” is to get the ideas down as they come, write the scenes as quickly as possible, and leave notes in the margins for later cleanup. The first rewrite is that later cleanup. Much of it is rewriting areas where I left notations like “This section doesn’t fit the way she accepts XX when XXX happens. – Rewrite!“. Or “Need to remove this reference so that it doesn’t complicate XYZ in the storyline later.” Or “Where is this in timeline with regard to XYZ?  Need to time this discovery with 123 to set up the emotional intensity for next scene.

And as I mentioned, while all that was going on, a couple of great friends also started going over the manuscript and critiquing it as well. These beta readers sort through the manuscript (warts and all) to add their own notes, and see if mine make sense to them. Well, one of my beta readers got the manuscript back to me in just a few days. He assuaged my concerns in a few areas, and confirmed my concerns regarding some others (especially my worry that the ending felt a bit rushed). That gave me what I needed to know for the second rewrite pass.

Well, that second pass is now complete. I’ve addressed my notes, my first beta reader’s notes, done some cleanup on the division of the scenes and basic formatting, fleshed out the climax, and am about to begin another pass. This third pass will be easier, but more time-consuming. It will entail completely re-reading the manuscript (not just jumping from one note to the next) to see if there are any fine plot or character details that may contradict one another after all the rewriting that I’ve already done. After this one, assuming my second beta reader doesn’t find anything too glaring that takes too long to clean up (knock on wood), then a final fourth pass will finish it up before going in for professional editing.  That’s when they point out all the things I missed.  Wink  But that’s what it takes to put out a quality product.

In the meantime, I need to tackle other details as well — things like the dedication, acknowledgements, back cover blurb, synopsis, and author’s notes. I’ve also got to get back to my cover artist. I found last night where I completely missed an email from him. I’ve been so single-minded in the writing of SoP, that I’ve neglected emails and phone calls. I recall speaking to him sometime in the last week, and I was going to call him. Of course, I dropped the ball on that and he sent me a gentle reminder by email (which I also missed). So I need to get back to work with him this afternoon.

And that’s it.  SoP is just about to be out of my hands.  Then it’s off to the editors and I dive into the next project – the collaboration with Edward Lorn.  Chucklers will be a post apocalyptic horror novel, and promises to be quite a ride.  I’m looking forward to it… and dreading it at the same time.  That one is going to be a completely new experience. Eek!

That’s it for now.  Stay safe, everyone.

 Posted by at 11:12 am
Mar 022013
 

scales_of_justice_2Jury duty – I’m serving on a jury for the first time in my life.  It’s interesting, I’m learning new things, and it is my civic duty and all that.  But man is it a huge time sink!  I still have to get up at five in the morning, but since I’m having to commute to and from downtown Houston, my commute it usually more than an hour in the evenings, often putting me home later than six o’clock.  And while I can’t say anything about the actual case, I can at least express my disappointment that it looks like we won’t be finished until next Tuesday at the earliest.  In the meantime, my evening writing time is pretty much shot to hell.  That means my only real time to write is going to be on the weekends, and the deadline for SoP is coming up fast. Thinking

So - on to the actual writing news…

Streets of Payne – I managed to get another three thousand words in on SoP this week, and the story is finally starting to flow for me again.  This one seems to go that way for me.  It comes in what I’ve heard referenced as spits and spurts (and what a visual that phrase conjures Eek! ).  One day a scene flows smoothly and I’m able to knock out a few thousand words at once.  Then the scene resolves itself, laying the groundwork for the next part of the story, and my mind goes blank.  I lose the flow –don’t know how to get from point A to point B, and it frustrates the hell out of me for days, or sometimes weeks.  The good news is that I’m nearing the home stretch, and I think the story is about to roll over and stop fighting me.  It had better, because I’m on Lynn’s editing schedule for early April.  I don’t anticipate it being a problem, but I want the thing to be as smooth as I can get it before then.  You’ll note on the progress meter to the right that I set my goal at an anticipated eighty thousand words for this one.  From what I can tell, it will probably come in over that, but I can’t tell yet how far over it I’ll be.

In other SoP news, it looks like I’ve gotten the cover art problem resolved.  I can’t say yet for sure, and I won’t say any names yet, but it turns out that someone that I didn’t think could do that kind of cover art is willing to take it on and see what they can do with it.  Someone that I know has a great work ethic, business model, and is a pleasure to work with.  Here’s hoping it works out.

The Road to Rejas - It’s still selling, albeit slowly.  As you can see in the meter, I’m currently almost three-quarters of the way to my break-even point.  I figure it will likely be another six months or so before it makes it there, but I expected as much.  Novellas and anthologies just don’t sell as well as novels – at least not in this genre.  But it was a story that demanded to be told.

On a related note, I’ve had an idea banging around for a while that I might have to try to work on in the future.  A recurring complaint I had in Half Past Midnight reviews is that the reader never finds out how a lot of things happen.  The most common questions are: how did the war begin?  and how did Larry end up at the head of an armored military unit?  Unfortunately, since the book is written in a first person limited point of view from the perspective of Leeland Dawcett, the book is locked into only being able to talk about what Leeland can see.

Now, some of the questions will be answered in the next book in the series.  But there are other situations and characters that are specific to the story in HPM, and they probably won’t be coming back in the sequel.  I have the answers to how these things happened in my head, just as I have some of the secondary characters’ background stories in my head.  It was a kind of mental backdrop against which I wrote HPM.  But that has had me thinking for quite a while that I could write a series of short stories that explains some of these back stories, and put them together in a kind of anthology.  It’s an intriguing idea, but I don’t know whether or not it’s worth the cost of publication (again, novellas and anthologies don’t do well), or whether or not there would be enough demand for it.  Would there be a return on investment?  Maybe in the future, but for now, there are other projects coming up.

Speaking of which, I mentioned that there would be an announcement on a collaboration I’ll be working on with fellow Red Adept author Edward Lorn.  Ed and I met through Red Adept Publishing, and we hit it off right away.  It’s ironic, considering the fact that he has a gritty, no-holds-barred, in your face style of writing, where I am usually more reserved (some say timid Big Smile ).  Each of us serves as the yin to the other’s yang.  I suppose that’s why we get along so well.

We had originally planned on working on a story together a few months ago.  We had the basic idea, some characters, and even wrote a few chapters together.  But the story didn’t completely grab us, and we each had other projects we were working on.  So we benched it for the time being.

Then Ed contacted me with another idea a few weeks ago.  We brainstormed it for a while, and a lot of the story gelled for us almost immediately.  It is going to be a blending of our two styles, and will definitely be the darkest thing I’ve ever worked on – so dark that I fully anticipate some trouble sleeping some nights while working on it.  At the same time, the story has really grabbed me, and in a perverse, masochistic sort of way, I’m really looking forward to writing it.  So we begin work on it this summer.  Ed’s even worked out our tag line.  Cool

So watch in coming months for more news about…

Chucklers

Coming in 2014 … Laughter is contagious.

 Posted by at 5:11 pm
Feb 132013
 
Sorry...

Sorry…

So it’s been a month since I posted anything here.  Wow!  Question   First of all, I apologize.  I know I told you I would be posting less frequently, but I honestly never intended for it to be a whole month.  Still, it’s been a productive month, so I don’t feel like a complete loser.  There have been the usual issues around the house.  My dad’s been ill, my wife was ill, I was ill… we’ve just been a sickly bunch.  LOL.

But I’ve gotten quite a bit done, too.  I think my word count on Streets of Payne has increased by about 10k words since I last posted.  Don’t get me wrong, there is still a lot to do on it, but the end is in sight.  Yay!!  Grin

And I’ve made some decisions with regards to my last post.  You know, the one where I threw in the towel and decided I’m going to quit trying to avoid the political infighting?  Well, rather than let this blog turn into a long diatribe of politics and bickering, I decided I would dust off my old “Sm1ley’s Musings” page and post my rants there.  I’ll link to them from here, but for the most part, this site will continue to be my “business” site, geared specifically to the craft of writing.

And to try to keep on a schedule that lets me write as much as possible, I’m going to try & keep these posts shorter.  The majority of my time needs to remain focused on writing.  As I’ve said before, if I want this to become a career, then I have to approach it in a businesslike fashion.

So, on that note, let’s see… other writing news….

Streets of Payne 06DEC2012

Streets of Payne 06DEC2012

Streets of Payne – I’ve mentioned before that I was having problems with the artist I hired to do the cover art.  I found several months ago that I was far from the only person that was having trouble getting her to respond.  There was an entire thread on Kindleboards with various authors complaining about her lack of response (see “Anyone who bought covers from Ana Fagarazzi heard from her lately?“.  She initially said she’d lost email service and also been involved in a motorcycle accident.  Everyone calmed down, and it appeared for a while that she was getting back into the swing of things.  I was happy to wait because the woman is incredibly talented, and I wasn’t in any big hurry.  But this long journey with her began back in July, and now it’s mid-February.  And once again, she seems to have disappeared.  In December, she sent me the cover you see here.  I was thrilled!  I mean, that is an awesome pice of work.  However, there are two minor changes I needed her to make, and I needed her to send me a licensing agreement so I could legally use the cover.  I emailed her back, thanked her for the great artwork, and asked for the changes and license agreement.  I haven’t heard back from her.  Despite repeated emails and PMs in Facebook, she has refused to respond.  Additionally, I’ve heard from other authors who contracted with her and she’s not responding to them, either.  In one instance, it appears that the cover commissioned by one author was also sold to a second author for use on their book!

So, I can’t use the cover I paid for, I can’t get the artist to respond to any communication, I couldn’t trust her even if she did, and I’m running out of time.  So here is the only look anyone is likely to ever get of the cover I was originally going to use.  And now I have to step back and punt.  I have to find another cover artist and hire them to do a whole new cover from scratch.  And because I had my heart set on the one already done, anything else is going to take me some time to wrap my head around.  It’s just a really frustrating situation.  Struggle

Half Past Midnight  - Sales have pretty much bottomed out.  Last year was a hell of a year for HPM.  The novel did so much better than I ever thought it would, and I am so grateful to those
of you who helped me with it.  It was my first novel, and I learned a LOT from it.  Honestly, if I had it to do over again, there are several things I would do differently.  But I figure that’s as
it should be.  I will always want to learn more, and I’ll always want to put out the best product I can.  So HPM has taught me a lot, and will serve as a launch pad for another book later this year.  But that’s for later.  Smile

Y12 – The sequel to HPM is still in the planning stages, but it keeps interrupting my flow while writing SoP.  I find my conversations with Amber Payne are constantly interrupted by the characters of Y12.  The bad thing is, I’m really fascinated by some of what they want to say, and often follow them off on a tangent, leaving poor Amber hanging in the lurch.  I think maybe progress on SoP is slower than I would like because she’s pissed at me for ignoring her.  Wink

Explorers: Beyond the Horizon - This is the Dead Robots’ Society anthology I was a part of.  I wrote a short story called The Burning Land that was accepted for the book, and I am actually quite proud of it.  In fact, while I had no input into the creation of the anthology other than that one contribution, I really happy with the book as a whole, and am really proud to have been a part of it.  Unfortunately, sales on it have been pretty abysmal.  It’s pretty much what we all expected going in – anthologies as a whole simply don’t generally do well.  It’s a shame because I think that short story is possibly the best thing I’ve written to date.  Enough so that I would like to come back to it in the future to see about further exploring the world in which it takes place.  But that’s for another time.

And for writing news, that’s it – except for this one little teaser…

You may recall that I mentioned that I was going to be working on a collaborative novel with Edward Lorn.  I had it listed on the books as “EBS”.  Well, he and I have decided to table that project indefinitely in favor of another.  The main story line is straight from the twisted depths of Ed’s messed up mind (and I say that with love, E.), but the more we discussed it, the more I got drawn into it.  By the end of our discussion, Ed had convinced me to try my hand at writing something so dark and disturbing that I honestly think this thing may give me trouble sleeping as we write it.  I’ve never written horror before, but this guy has found a story that truly intrigues me.  Yes people, Ed Lorn has pulled me over to the dark side.  We plan to begin work on the novel this summer, and I think we’re probably going to make a teaser announcement soon, so watch for it.

All right, that’s really it now.  For the writing schtuff, anyway.  And if you’re interested in the more personal side of what makes me tick (or drives me crazy), keep an eye open for announcements about posts on my other site, “Sm1ley’s Musings“.  In the meantime, stay safe everyone!